I used Ashmeena's poem to rewrite into three lines. here it is.
I feel as if I am one person in many places.
Between the emptiness in my soul and the emptiness in my heart,
I am incomplete.
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A blog for the creative writing class taught by Corey Frost at Queens College in the fall of 2008.
1 comment:
good job!
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