Monday, December 8, 2008

Haiku Version of Ashmeena's Poem "Paths"

"One step at a time, slowly but without doubt,
I moved forward, into the light, staring up my path.
Should I choose the first or the second road?"

2 comments:

Justine said...

I think that this poem sums up Ashmeena's really well, you managed to capture the feeling of the original poem in just three lines.

Ashmeena Teakram said...

i love the fact that u chose the exact lines from my poem to make a haiku.....n it still says the exact same thing.....nice job!