A colorful garden
filled with big bold roses,
that are so sweetly scented ,
it burns your nose.
A piercing red arrow,
with fierce flames
hittting it's target
- which happens to be a heart!.
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A blog for the creative writing class taught by Corey Frost at Queens College in the fall of 2008.
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Hi... i am a bit confused by your piece... what is the overall objective? what is relationship between the two stanzas? They seem to be independent of each other (don't belong together)... You might want to work on the unity of the piece and determine what you want the reader to get from reading your work.
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