Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Remake of Saw 1

Curtain rises. A bathtub filled with water is at the left side of the stage. A chain is tied to a pole next to a toilet, leading into the bathtub. In the middle, a man is laying flat on the floor, with thick red solution surrounding him. The spotlight of this seen soon fades, and all you see is darkness. The theater becomes silent except for a few confused and frightened guests. Suddenly, the silence is broken with a violent noise coming from the bathtub. As the lights are turned back on, a man struggles for air as he springs from the tub and onto the black cement. Drenched in water, he screams for help as he tries to free himself from the metal chain. In return, his screams are heard echoing within the theater.

2 comments:

Ashmeena Teakram said...

very descriptive i must say....nice work!

Justine said...

This scene really does remind me of saw. I like that it is very descriptive, I could really picture it all going on in my head.