Monday, October 27, 2008

The story which we all contributed to in class. (i forgot what the exercise is called)

"Everyday I imagine what it would be like to have palm trees in New York." Such an invasive species would quickly die off and leave nothing but an empty woody carcass. But that's why it's important to recognize when to lay low and when to attack. One wrong move and it could be the end of your life, you have to act smart and think things through. But one day one lady made the wrong move and met her demise. She thought she was making the right decision, unfortunately not. Unfortunately because her father had made the same mistake. This mistake was that she did not know who the father of her child was beccause she was so wanted by others. She had offered herself as a gift in return for their admiration. All the priests could do was stare at this girl in awe. You know how those catholics school girls can be, mighty, mighty, dirty birds when they want to be. They needed to be sent to boot camp, with lots of muddy obstacle courses and disgusting cafeteria food. Maybe that would teach them to flush the toilet next time they go and not day dream about palm trees in New York.

1 comment:

Trishy said...

I love how you tied it all together at the end of the piece. I remember that when it was read on the Quad the ending and beginning were not connected at all. It's humorous but at the same time has a lot of depth. Great job!