a snny day = otside n play
a snny day = happy :)
a rny day = sty inside n sleep
a rny day = grmpy :(
whte snw on ground = coats&earmuffs
whte snw on ground = gloves&scarfs :(
a snny day = whte snw melts
a snny day = happy :)
Tuesday, October 14, 2008
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I think that this poem is really cute. It has a very simply concept but with a short about of avaible characters, I think that it is really good. It was creative the way that you wrote your words (like how you shorten them) and used faces in the poem.
Nice. I like the use of smileys, although perhaps you could play around with this some more. What's wrong with gloves and scarfs, anyway?
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