Tuesday, October 14, 2008

txt message poem

a snny day = otside n play
a snny day = happy :)
a rny day = sty inside n sleep
a rny day = grmpy :(
whte snw on ground = coats&earmuffs
whte snw on ground = gloves&scarfs :(
a snny day = whte snw melts
a snny day = happy :)

2 comments:

Justine said...

I think that this poem is really cute. It has a very simply concept but with a short about of avaible characters, I think that it is really good. It was creative the way that you wrote your words (like how you shorten them) and used faces in the poem.

Corey Frost said...

Nice. I like the use of smileys, although perhaps you could play around with this some more. What's wrong with gloves and scarfs, anyway?